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"I'm sorry I never got the chance to meet your grandfather. He seems to have a great sense of humour," Kate smiled.
"Sure right. As long as you're not bearing the brunt of it. What would my colleagues think of me after behaving like a bull for the past months?"
"They will only believe that you were in love."
"Yep, and they would be right," Scott smiled. "I love you, Mrs Ashton."
"And I love you, Mr Ashton. Now, didn't those marriage vows state that you should keep me happy?
"Again?"
"Yes, please. Or do I need to bring out that dildo?"
"Never. Just come here and I'll show you the real thing," he said as he rolled on top of her.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoFrom the storyline point of view they defaulted too easily into fucking all along the way. It would have been more realistic if they had actually quarrelled instead.
Anonymousover 2 years agoI like this story the best of the trilogy (undercover, ..guest). The premise is so good and I didn’t see it coming! I would have liked more groveling though. Kate mostly gives in to his whims.
Anonymousover 2 years agoOk story overall.
The beginning was a bit rushed, the middle was good, though almost no time was given to demonstrate a developing friendship, and the end felt hollow, with physical attraction being the most important thing. He showed her his love physically, which only really demonstrates physical attraction, or possibly nymphomania. As far as I can tell he did absolutely nothing to demonstrate any actual love. She let him back into her life much too soon, and forgave him much too quickly. The story sets her up as a strong independent woman, but it turns out she's weak and easily dominated. She never demonstrates any actual strength, no man takes her seriously, she endures public sexual harassment, and what could be considered sexual assault, repeatedly.
I really wanted to like this story, but it kept getting worse and less believable.
It was pretty OK, but I would call it great.
