All Comments on 'Condition'Er Ch. 01-02'

You sabotaged this story and lost this reader with the unnecessary digs at our president. Luckily I read that paragraph first when skimming this political tantrum of yours. Most fortunate.

I as well was repulsed by the comments against our President. No more reads for you.

There are so many idiots that love 45 you will lose some of your audience.

Apart from that, take it slower. This part of the story alone could have taken longer but been much more believable if the initial seduction had been more in the mind and less overt until after the conditioner was used

I really love how the conditioner does not eradicate the personality of the woman. It will give you better characters and more inventive sex. It is how I am conditioned through hypnosis and I am a better slut because of it.

Forget the comment about politics. If that deflated them, then they need different porn to read.

All of the exposition is compressed into these long paragraphs of dialogue that seen to really undermine a real sense of story. It's probably too late now, but if there to characters hadn't said literally everything there is to know about them all at once, it would have made more sense. Also, he realizes way too quick that this woman who was already trying to sleep with him and is now still doing that is under his compete control. Slow down and let things happen more naturally

I think criticism of 45's all well and good really! I just think that he makes good satire harder, given everyones gotten shots in. Hope you take a look and find something that works!

Sorry, you've exceeded my capacity to endure your stories. 1* and if I could block you I would.

I got to the insult, stopped reading, and went straight to 1*.