All Comments on 'Confectioners Sugar'

That was the perfect pause line! ROFLMAO!

I liked it, but wish it hadn't ended quite so abruptly. The baseball line was great, though! very cute...

I don't think I'm so upset by the occasional mis-spelled word. I'm more interested in the whole story, the "gist" of things -- and this story turned out just about right. Keep it up!

I really liked this story and thought it was well written. There were a few misspelled words but whatever. I am going to go read more of your stories now.

I'm sorry for the errors but I didn't expend a lot of effort on this story. I just couldn't sleep one night and decided to kill time. I'll try and do better, but I've always been atrocious when it comes to my reliance upon spell-check. At least I didn't flub my sentences too badly.

Glad you all liked it enough to give me a few lines though. That's always greatly appreciated.

The spelling was a trial but the story and characters made up for it, I should say. Don't let anybody get after you. keep writing!

Is this story true? Did you actually do this with a fellow?

That was one of the best one page stories I've had the pleasure to come across. Thank you.