by M. Millswan
Definitely a 5 stars story. So beautifully written, can’t wait for the next part!!
One of the best stories I have read since finding this website. I truly enjoyed the slow description of what he was doing and what she was feeling. Sad part is where is Pt. 3???? I would like to see how this would end.
Awesome. Edging the entire time reading both stories. I will dream about your next installment until it cums.
WOW, simply WOW! I absolutely LOVE this story. I nearly missed this second part for some reason - but I've finally read it and I really enjoyed it. Your writing style is absolutely amazing! I can hardly wait for a third part (which will hopefully come at some point in time).
Will there be another installment? I so want to read about them going all the way!
Great story - love the detailed way of building up the tension! Even inspired me to do some new exhibitionistic behavior!
This is so very exciting! The slow progression and the details of her emotions, the way Mr. Taylor plays along, all the while they both know exactly what it is that is happening.
So Hot! ;->
I don't think I have ever read anything quite as powerful and sensual as that you have written the story of an explosion of adult emotion in the mind and body of an extremely inexperienced young girl and how she reacted to all those sensations. Brilliantly written.
Just amazing. Jenny Lynn's excitement at her new experiences is intoxicating. The more admiration she receives, the more addicted she becomes to going further and further. I can't wait to hear how her week of gym equipment training carries on. How will she turn her tuition into other adventures in public? Always looking out for mirrors and reflections for "accidental" flashes and knowing looks at her admirers. Her sewing skills with velcro and her scoop tops add a whole world of possibilities. Wonderful!