by M. Millswan
I cannot wait until next adventure. It was pretty close. Love the pace and style. Thank you
Great story, keep it innocent and I want to hear about more of her opportunities to show off
Excellent story! If it's not REALLY "real," you managed to sell it as such.
Great job! Need more!
Wishes do come true, I have a few of my own. I was hoping Mrs. Taylor cought them and teach her a lesson
Yes! A lovely story that captures the thrill and nervousness of an emerging exhibitionist. Now she’s ready and eager for the next level… and the next… and the next.
A very enjoyable story, as always with Millswan stories. It allows one's imagination to roam and blossom!
You can literally feel Jenny Lynn's breathing get heavier and heavier as her excitement grows. Really hot.
Fantastic - great subject matter and very well written. Thanks so much. About to go see if there are more in this series! Fingers crossed.
It's very hot and very nicely written. The excitement and thesion are palpable!
Very erotic, sensitively written and does stretch suspension of belief too far. I am interested in what she will do with her very attractive tits.
Excellent story - well written with good flow (no pun intended) and just the right length. I applaud keeping the story not overly explicit - leaving just enough detail to arouse the readers imagination.
Very erotic and very dramatic!
Well told, hope to read more of this girls adventures ;->
This reminds me of an experience I had once. I was visiting the brother of a guy I knew, in a holiday region. They invited me to stay a few days while I looked for a local job. Monday came, and he went off to work. I was in the back yard feeding foodscraps to their chooks, at his wife's request. She then came outside in a cheesecloth kaftan, with nothing underneath. She decided to water her apricot tree. With the sun behind her, this thing was completely see-through, and when she sprayed the water, the front of the kaftan became slightly damp and completely see-through. It wasn't see-through when we'd been in the house. She carried on as if nothing was happening. I took in the view without reacting...she didn't manage to seduce me there and then, but it wasn't long before she did. She knew exactly what she was doing...and exactly what she wanted. LOL.