All Comments on 'Confidence of a Lion'

Sorry but you lost me when there were laboured descriptions of the past given to people who already knew it in even better detail than the speaker.

“It's not your fault that you've suffered from hangover trauma following the death of your parents and younger sister seven months ago in a horrific vehicle accident, from which you escaped virtually unscathed physically.”

No high school student ever would speak using such language. Need a touch of realism.

Why do you two (Anonymous and eft71) bother to comment on contributions if my writing bothers you. I suggest you switch to reading comics. The gutless wonder behind the name 'Anonymous' may have the problem of tearing his/her comic to shreds without even reading it. And then of I imagine will suck his/her dummy.

Ivan sounds like such a sexy well-developed muscular young man. How about continuing tis story, getting them together romantically, and letting them strip each other for love-making. Ivan can have a bit of sexy hair for that manly chest and abs!