All Comments on 'Confined at My Wife's House Pt. 01'

Interesting

Too Short

Too Little Details

i guess there is more on the way and this is a good start but if the following episodes are never published then this will be one of the worst stories ever

focus on the quality of your stories

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HARDLY A TEASE

post next part soon

YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER AND IT IS UNDERSTANDABLE THAT YOU HAVE TRIED SOMETHING DIFFERENT BY NOT FULLY REVEALING THE DETAILS.

BUT YOU CANNOT EXPECT US READERS TO KEEP GUESSING ABOUT THE PLOT & CHARACTERS, SO MUCH.

PLEASE TAKE CARE TO GIVE MORE CLARITY IN THE NEXT EPISODES.

Not familiar with your writing. I read your prologue and gave this piece a try; to no avail.

I did not/could not complete reading this effort, so will not rate it so-as to negatively impact your efforts.

I will, however, read future offerings if they conform to what some of the legitimate comments infer.

the idea was good, but almost nothing is known

even who is who has not been made clear

waiting’s for Part 2

What Is This

should have been longer or more detailed

Lazy

This made me mad, not hard

Take a break. It seems you have run out of ideas. You need a 6 month sabbatical, hopefully you will then be able to generate those high quality stories that you are very capable of.

What do you do when you find someone has posted photos of your Sister-In-Law nearly naked and having sex on the internet?