by brucewayneegypt
How can you enjoy something so scattered. This is a porn site, not a psychiatrist's office. You need help. SORRY!!
Hard to understand. Names in Indian are confusing as to male an female, and it appear to be the author being clut. I assume, from the comments that it is an ethnic piece.
XYZ
Definitely, need side stories to this... Cause the way you writing it, makes it seems like there is alot of sex happening & not with the narrator though... Can't wait to read more...
what a shitty story, I don't even know why I expected something like that from this beta horn