All Comments on 'Conjuresses Ch. 01'

This was far better than I had anticipated. Great job. The only comment I would have is to expand a bit on the descriptiveness of the surroundings of Mom's bedroom and related magical items. My imagination was just sparked enough but I think you can turn it into a flame.

Thanks and best wishes.

I loved the story! I must agree, though, that a bit more of a description of Lucia's "study" would fuel the fires of the imagination even more. In fact, I'd go so far to say that this story has ALL the potential of making a wonderful book (as in e-book or physical)!! PLEASE, keep writing more of this wonderful story!