All Comments on 'Connect the Dots'

I never give 100's to stories... they have to be something special for that and this one is. Great plot twist and a very believable plot. Well done!

Nicely done my man, nicely done. Good plots with a twist are my kind of stories.

Thank you,

PW

This really sucked in my opinion. He has his mother in his embrace and then he starts the abuse part. What an ass of a story

Nicely done and too believable for a porn site. I mean that in only the best sense.

You had a good story going until the ending. This kind of love has it own long list of bad endings but you made a possible good ending into a ending that can only be discribed as sucking the life out of the reader. next time please stop earlier in your story.