by NelSymington
That's a good story! Your pacing is great and I like how you describe things.
A perfect mommy and her son, why bother adding another character that would ruin their dynamic. Keep it to just the two.
Love the idea, but you need to slow things down. Extend out the action.
i think the 2nd person narrative would have felt more natural without a name for the son. it would be easier to slip into the protagonist role. other than that it was a good read. a little skippy at times but still good!
Great story. Enjoy it until the last page. Bring in another mature women, not a young girl.
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