All Comments on 'Connor's Bimbo Mommy'

by NelSymington

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

That's a good story! Your pacing is great and I like how you describe things.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Good until you introduced another bimbo into it

A perfect mommy and her son, why bother adding another character that would ruin their dynamic. Keep it to just the two.

TacocarnitasTacocarnitasabout 3 years ago
Too fast!

Love the idea, but you need to slow things down. Extend out the action.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

i think the 2nd person narrative would have felt more natural without a name for the son. it would be easier to slip into the protagonist role. other than that it was a good read. a little skippy at times but still good!

NelSymingtonNelSymingtonabout 3 years agoAuthor

helpful feedback everybody, thank you!

BigDunk48BigDunk48over 1 year ago

Great story. Enjoy it until the last page. Bring in another mature women, not a young girl.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Really love this! It's so hard to find good milf bimbofication incest. I will say maybe spend more time describe the changes for a better scope of the transformations

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