All Comments on 'Connor's Fingers'

I liked the way you described the finger-sucking scenes. It turned something that I wouldn't find erotic into an erotic piece.

Love the slow build up and how u made something sound so sexy. Ur great with ur words. Wld love you hear more of the story. Good luck n keep up the great writing.

Just Wow! The Hottest 2 pager I've read in a long time! Bravo, 5 Stars! Wouldn't be interesting, to find Maggie is Bi, and she joins them in a hot threesome in the near future. Maybe even after the party, when she's tipsy and spends the night.

Excellent build up and great description

Isn't that all that's needed sometimes. Just something to ignite the passion too change the course of behaviour or the direction of travel. A unique storyline but well told.

I really liked the build up and the unforced and natural progression of the story. As it finished I was almost saying to myself, I wonder what happened next. Maybe you could write some more.

Keep up the good writing

You definitely need to add to this. I see so much potential with it. Really well done establishing the characters and their relationship. Feels very real

Would love to see a long series on this, maybe the boss joins in later?

I absolutely loved it. More please.

Damn that was hot!

That's a shorter story that works. It's exactly what I was looking for.

Please...Can’t wait for the next chapter.

What happens when Maggie arrives.

Threesome?

Terrific premise.

Super-hot action. And so well written.

So much hot action all because a finger cut and a splinter.

Looking forward to many chapters.

Five stars.

Very hot and well written. Only a few very minor errors.