by connorwitmer
Good story. I liked the fact that he just went for it. Even though few words were said, both parties had a good time.
The way you write is quite enjoyable to read. Looking forward to reading more!
Really enjoying this story and continue to appreciate your quick updates!
promising first story. Perhaps a little more "look ma I can style" than would be ideal (was there a "so too" in there?), and some infelicities in editing (a later/later sentence and also a small/small I think?). But don't let those quibbles override—this one is good and I'm really looking forward to seeing more from you. (But this seemed wrong? " quiz me on the difference between the two in modern culture - but geek is unequivocally better than nerd. In fact, geeks could be sexy."? Doesn't ring true to me?)
Dude I'm binge reading this story now and I got to tell you that it is really, really good. If you're truely 21 or 22 and just started writing you're great at it. Great story, character development and of course sex.
Somehow, I feel like this is more of a confession than a story--keep up the good work, going next to CH 02.
This kinda turned me on lol but probs cause I was watching lesbian as well as reading this