All Comments on 'Connor's Pretty Horny Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
New guy at this

Good story. I liked the fact that he just went for it. Even though few words were said, both parties had a good time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good Story beginning

The way you write is quite enjoyable to read. Looking forward to reading more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Story So Far

Really enjoying this story and continue to appreciate your quick updates!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

promising first story. Perhaps a little more "look ma I can style" than would be ideal (was there a "so too" in there?), and some infelicities in editing (a later/later sentence and also a small/small I think?). But don't let those quibbles override—this one is good and I'm really looking forward to seeing more from you. (But this seemed wrong? " quiz me on the difference between the two in modern culture - but geek is unequivocally better than nerd. In fact, geeks could be sexy."? Doesn't ring true to me?)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Just dropping a line

Hey man, nice job. Really liking your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Dude I'm binge reading this story now and I got to tell you that it is really, really good. If you're truely 21 or 22 and just started writing you're great at it. Great story, character development and of course sex.

o2byoungo2byoungover 6 years ago
Great start

Somehow, I feel like this is more of a confession than a story--keep up the good work, going next to CH 02.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I’m straight

This kinda turned me on lol but probs cause I was watching lesbian as well as reading this

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