by TheSpiritWriter
This isn’t triggering: it’s aggravating.
Blackmail, rape, infidelity, degradation, emotional trauma. What’s next? A visit from Chris Hansen because he’s trying to hook up with underaged girls?
Once, I would call a mistake, but you wrote both 'made me cum on site' and 'she crawled out of site' in different parts of the same page. In both cases, it should be sight, not site. Just a couple examples of a shockingly abysmal lack of vocabulary, knowledge of sentence structure, or even basic elements of human communication, you illiterate, misogynistic piece of trash.
It was fantastic and reminded me of Lit tales from long ago that are far too infrequent the last few years. Do take your time formulating and executing all you have planned for Hannah. Re: your detractors, like her they "doth protest too much" but assuredly enjoyed it
An unpleasant read which left me feeling uncomfortable. Not helped by many errors.
People who don't read the tags and then complain...
I personally loved it and can't wait for more.