All Comments on 'Conscience Of A Soldier Ch. 00'

I like how you god-moded her in the beginning and then undid that by adding a weakness that is slowly undermining her Sayin heritage and conditioning. It'll be nice to see her turn around.

worth the read unlike alot of others. please continue

The story is amazing and holds a lot of promise. But please finish your 'Living with Katrina' series first. I am complete obsessed with it

Have seen a few shows of DBZ. can't say the show ever caught my attention. The constant bragging of the characters kind of got on my nerves. Never could figure out the exact use of the dragon balls. Shrug. Like i said it didn't catch my attention.

You did to some extent. Enough that I will read the next one anyway.

Will have to put this one in the will see category for now.

M.S.Tarot

It would be nice to see this turn to where she can see the truth. To use her feelings like there ment to be and fight aganst the plauge.

If she has two years then possibly that will be enough time for her to see life in a different light.

Oh well,, Considering if it now, then were toast. To much bickering and greed for us to look like saving to her. The only way she could be swayed is to come upon a old warrier and listen to what a real fight is about and what price honor and duty ask. Then hear what hinsight would do if compasion was used instead of the sword.

Ghost

Trying to embellished a cartoon is a form of.plagiarism do something original

but this is very well done. Im quite looking forward to future installments! (And ignore the idiot commenters.)

i liked how you made the species look though a bit too ruthless. so when is the next coming

good i liked it . i am waiting for the next one.

God-like powers sit badly with murderous psychopaths. Psychopaths are missing certain brain capabilities, they don't have the extra mental powers that are the result of dedicated personal development.

I want no need more please writr more!!!!!