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All Comments on 'Consequences'

by satusfaxion

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markellymarkellyover 8 years ago
Nice.

A good flash story, well done.

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsover 8 years ago
not terrible but

I - you stories are not popular on Lit. for some very good reasons:

When the you is male then the writer has lost female readers.

When the you is female then the writer has lost male readers.

chytownchytownover 8 years ago
Very Good Reading****

Great Flash!! Thanks for sharing.

rightbankrightbankover 8 years ago
you chose a difficult topic

and wrote it in an unusual format.

interesting way to start

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I can't stand this style of writing. 1/2 tarnished star.

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