All Comments on 'Consequences'

Loved your story, cant wait to read more.

Great story snd oh so real life .

Well written but the story struck me as a bit irresponsible. She’s pregnant, he’s the father, and is going to let her bear the wrath of their parents alone. Although I wasn’t impressed with that - I did like your story. Thanks for sharing it.

Was written nice but I had to laugh at the end. Says he's gonna support her secretly and I thought, with what? He's in college and she just graduated HS. They are both the definition of broke. Sorry, but I had a laughing fit at that point. Good story though.

Only four outcomes to going bareback.

Fortunately, you didn't get a dose.

Fortunately, she didn't get a dose.

Unfortunately you didn't share wild uninhibited, no consequences sex.

And then there is outcome number four . . .

Very good read. Please write other chapters.

Average story. AAA++

For your next story, please use a beta reader to let you know whether or not the story was worth submitting. If you did that for this story, you would've been saved the embarrassment of this. =

Bring the mother into the mix!

So brief it might as well not have been written. Next time write a story, not a synopsis.

Absolutely loved it. I only wish it was longer and more detailed. Would love to have seen more vividly the actual night he knocked her up. More please!

A beautiful brief expression of the deep feelings of this young man, glad to have impregnated the young woman he trusts. The title is a clever context and provides all the framing I needed to read the story.

I don't normally comment here, but as someone who's been a beta reader elsewhere for years, I was tickled and irritated by one or two sophmoric comments below and wanted to share my own synopsis and say thanks for writing.

Wow, name is really on the nose there. Keep up your subtlety mr. impregrisk.

Now what, the author just leaves the reader hanging? 4/5

Like to point out that ONLY IDENTITICAL twins can have 100% shared DNA. Full siblings have ROUGHLY 50% shared DNA (sometimes more, sometimes less). I'll also note that, while breeding between siblings DOES come with a MUCH higher rate of complications, still, the overwhelming majority of offspring from inbreeding are healthy with no defects. Even 1st cousins only have a 2-3% higher risk of defects than unrelated couples.

This needs to be longer!!

@anonymous

7% higher for 1st cousins, not 3%. just because incest fiction is hot doesnt mean you should pretend inbreeding isnt that bad in real life. downplaying the damage is uncool.

I love this, and I have to admit, I'm jealous too. I've wanted to have a baby with my sister for years, I want to be the couple in this story.

This brings to mind a true story everyone in my area has heard differing versions of. I heard identical twin sister were swapping lives on a regular basis. During the swapping, one sister fell in love with her sister's husband. The swapping was working like a charm until...the husband wanted to start a family.

In high school, I got pregnant by my young brother who was a freshman, and I was a senior. We lived in Los Angeles with our mother. We were a Latino family, and, in my heart, I knew that mom wouldn't allow me to abort the baby. So, once it was confirmed that I was pregnant with Jimi's baby we told mom. And as I figured once mom got over the shock that her son got his sister, her daughter pregnant she settled down. After all the baby was her grandbaby.

It has been 15 years since we told mom about our baby and since I gave mom 4 more grandbabies, and she loved every second of having them. She knows that Jimi and I love one another and that our family in the number one concern and mom is part of that family.