All Comments on 'Consider the Lily Ch. 01'

You lost this reader in the third paragraph where two chests were pressed tightly together while a cock was deep in his ass...that picture just doesn't work ! See ya.

This story is unfinished from 2005. The 4 chapters don't even address the title, and other inconsistencies.

You need to get an editor,overall it seems to be a good story and the pace needs to be more sedate they went too fast for it to be a great move slow down work through it.

is there any one out there who hasnt had a bath thing happen to them.?

the story is hot but not as hot as the writer. good work babe.

More more!!!!!

Awesome start!