by ProfBriefs
Nicely done. Your story is developing nicely, although it seems to be covering a lot of ground on a single page, but it's all good. I'm looking forward to the wedding.
Continue, I am loving the story, this is amazing, please dont leave us waiting so long for the next chapter though, your detail is amazing, please keep it up!!
An excellent second chapter - although I'm inclined to suggest that it should be the end of this story or it may become somewhat contrived.
But in no way is that a derogatory remark; I'm just not wanting you to spoil it.
However, do please carry on writing - you're not at all bad!
And I think I've fallen for Cass too!
The best, erotic and loving story I've read in years. I want to be him, I want to be her, giving and receiving any which way. Thanks for a great piece of writing. Is it a true story? 🌹
Being that it's been more than six months since we saw another chapter I think this is the end which saddens me. I really enjoyed this story and have read it a few times. I really hope you do continue this story or at least come back as a writer and write other stories as well. This story was really sweet and if you can't be happy reading this then there is something wrong with you.
Sure a beautiful and sexy story. I could only hope to have such a relationship.