All Comments on 'Continuing Story of Bungalow Bill'

Another Tongue In Cheek bit of entertainment from HDK, good use of the 5 minutes to read.

Your are still one of the best. I am glad things turned out ok for the couple.

Sweet story & funny at times. It was interesting & I thought that maybe Bob & Caroline were having an affair, but it was good to see nothing like that happened.<p>What I really liked in this story was the <i>communication<i/> between Bill & Caroline. <b>Rare<b/> I'd say.<p/><p>Normally, in loving wife stories -- husband feels wife is having an affair & he keeps suspecting, following his wife. It was good to see a couple who knew the importance of <i>Communication<i/>

<p/><p>Excellent story & a fun read<p/>

This is a top notch story to read on a lazy Saturday morning in mid to late summer. The comedy is OUTSTANDING. The story line is EXCELLENT. Thank you for this and all your other stories HDK. You are the best comedy writer posting on Loving Wives. RAG

From the very beginning, the originality and wacky humor of this one sets it apart. We quickly come to understand how much of a self-absorbed and foolish man the husband is, and how he doesn't see clearly what a great deal he's got. Then, by the end when we've heard his wife, we realize that she's got a pretty sweet deal too: her husband may be a little slow-witted, but he's got a lot of other fine qualities that make him a pretty good catch. It's the reverse of the usual--he appears to have the looks, and she's clearly the one with the brains! Thanks, HDK, for a wonderfully funny and sweet little tale. (By the way: Jessica Simpson? Are you kidding me???) ohio

She has more than a MBA, she is a master of deception. She fucks anyone she wants and convinces her poor naive husband that she is faithful. She uses him as a boy toy, but when she wants the big cock that rocks her world, she just arranges a meeting, tells her husband she will be late, and gets her brains fucked out by her big dick lover. Thanks for the story......Rich

As usual, you're still tops HDK! Your 'Loving Wives' are exactly that. Way to go....

You never cease to amaze, HDK. You take a story line which could have gone south in a heartbeat, and made it delightful. (Taco Bell??!!!! ROFLMAO!!!) Nice work.

-- KK in Texas

They must have to wear hip boots to wade through all that bullshit they are slinging at each other.

Boyd

As soon as I can wipe the tears of laughter from my eyes, I'll complete this message. HDK, I'm surprised at you - well, not really, this is about what we've come to expect. You've taken the droll usuall cheating wife story and reversed everything and made us laugh, guffaw, and snort with surprise. The hard working, clueless husband becomes a prety smart dame. The bombshell wife becomes a movie idol guy. Every other cliche of a LW is in there somewhere and your readers are left rolling on the floor laughing their asses off. Thank you darling man.

Just sitting here chuckling to myself. I do like your twisted sense of humor. A dolt and a brain, a hunk and a...well less well endowed, shall we say. Turned into a funny and interesting story.

You are sick sick man and I love it. Oddly though there is a message in there isn't there? Everyone has their strengths, we just need to see them.

Fun as usual.

Well written and funny. I liked it but it wasn't quite as funny as some of your humorous stories. It does tell a tale about true love though. Not all of us are raving beauties but to those of us who have someone who truly loves us what can I say? Maybe Love IS Blind?

I'll pay you big-time to write one of these every week.Good to see Dig-daddyetc. not fooled!-pistolpackinpete

than HDK? Nah! After reading this story I doubt that there will even be a debate.

Your stories plots always amused me.

If I wanted to be hard to get along with I would point out that this hero has to be the stupidest husband I have ever heard about. Given this, HDK is even more impressive in moving the ideas around and making us very happy to have read this!

A very funny story.

ok,..WTF was that mate?

Sorry, but this was just bad.

HARD---This is one of the crap stories you have wrote--what kind of weed were you smoking --Chong

<p>I'm shocked; Shocked!!! that some people don't get this story. It's sweet, funny, and romantic. </p>

<p>A while back I was with my wife and heard some kid refer to her as that 'little old lady'. I stood there and laughed my ass off. That 'little old lady' is still hot. She looks great, has a truly world-class ass. Her legs remain top of the line. She's still blond (at least mostly). And she weighs about 110 pounds - all of it sleek. </P>

<p>My point is: it's in the eye of the beholder, as HDK points out in this terrific story. Each spouse ignores the significant others' faults and homes in on the other persons' special qualities - sometimes even seeing in that person things that other people fail to see.</p>

<p>This is a great story about love and what it takes to keep love alive.</p>

Tongue in cheek almost all the way through, except when she's extolling his virtues.

I loved it - another understated masterpiece commentary on the human condition.

Thank you,

Norman

Please give up the satire or humor or whatever you call it.This story about lazy ass-hole who lives off his wife's income while he loafs around the golf course, then steals her money to buy tickets to concert he knows she is not interested in is not really humorous. It is simply irritating. Please go back to your old classic style of writing.

60 year old George

This is so funny,sweet and brillant.I enjoyed everyword.

It was a pleasurable read!

It sounds as though Bill and Caroline were made for each other!

Bill, lazy? maybe? Could you be mr. mom? Most of us guys can't. Sounds like he was this, and is as hard as anything I have ever done in my life.

Thanks for writing!

A lot better story then (Closing the Deal). No cheating. They talked out their problems and felt better about their lives. In Closing the Deal in real life I don't thing any man would be happy about what she did.

Thanks for such an enlighten story plot. Go figure love respect honesty and understanding all in a single beautifully written story. Up lifting to say the least

There may be hope for the world after all LOL -I just wish there were more real life stories like that -

The dialogue was a little weak.

Truly a marriage made in heaven.

one way of the next generation to emulate. TK U MLJ LV NV

If you are not able to extract your tongue from your cheek, you might be in danger of suffocating!

Five but for the donation to the Nutty Rabbit-hunting Association

Another unbelievable tale. Then again, anything is possible in the Matrix.

One of the most 'feel good' tales I have read in Loving Wives. No anger, destructive behavior, hurt feelings, neglected children, or physical damage to evildoers! Thanks very much Harddaysknight, for this humorous tale! Dan

More Americans die from the gun hand of other Americans than are killed by Terrorists. The NRA remains the Muslins Terrorists favorite affiliation and charity what better way than to have your enemy kill themselves and their own children. That sound Amricans hear is the world laughing at you

a political agenda on any front. outlaw anything that can kill while your at it. laws stop crime. dumbass

A successful wife who appreciates what her house husband does in the marriage,

Good story, Harddaysknight.

Ummmmmmm, NO! Sorry guy but grown men don't get excited about going to see Jessica Simpson in concert. That has to be some sort of attempt at humor that missed the mark. Love your stories HDK but that was just bizarre!

Damn HDK,

You have a wicked sense of humor and a wonderful eye for the foibles of humanity. I think this is one of your best bits of humor ever.

This was fun and totally blindsided me. I was waiting for the confrontation in the bar. This is skilled writing at its humorists best. I thought it was serious as most stories are in the cheating wife venue and then you got me. I was not in good mood reading this and you pulled my chain so hard I had to relax my frown. Thank you for the entertainment!

That was such a stupid story

I like your humor and story-telling talent ... but frankly, I didn't understand the purpose of this story.

I liked this story and I understand the purpose. The husband it seems has too little faith in his wife. He clearly underestimates her and has marginal respect for her. He spends the first part of the story wondering why she still has her job. He writes it off to her using her sexuality to keep this position. This in itself shows how little he thinks of her abilities. Then he belittles her charities that she puts money away for. This guy needed a rude awakening. He has a wife who allows him to not work, while she works hard everyday. He is allowed him to play golf when he wants to. During football games, he watches it with his friends on their big flat screen, and she provides the snacks. On top of that, she gives him money just to spend. The story did not indicate that she complained about any of this. When he finds something that he wants to buy that is out of his range, what does he do? Notice that through all of this story, not once does he think about getting a job and helping out. His business is in the toilet, but he is out playing golf. In fact, his first option of coming up with the money was to go golfing a little less to save for it. He dismisses that. He was not going to do without. Plus, the guys would lose respect for him. No, he would rather steal from his wife, buy the tickets behind her back, and come up with some idiotic plan to manipulate her. When it doesn't go his way, he immediately suspects her of cheating on him. This guy was a selfish asshole. He is lucky to have a wife that is still faithful to him.

The main character happened to think it was a worthy cause, but that was not the focal point of my story. I never explain stories, but this is one of my favorites. The husband is a jackass in many ways. He's self centered and lazy. He is also good looking and thinks his wife is supermodel material, although she clearly is not. He has "bride goggles" on. He adores his wife in his way. She's smarter than him by a mile. She supports him and takes care of him. What does he do for her? He gave her two great kids and participated in their lives as a good father would. He was convinced his wife was a beauty and she liked that. He made her friends envious because he was a studly looking guy. They wondered how did she get a guy like that? Before she met him, she was the ugly duckling that did not attract good looking guys. Once she realized he actually thought she was hot and loved her, she realized she had exceeded her expected position in life by landing him. This marriage worked because they loved each other and each brought something important to the union. It is not my best scoring story, but it just may be the best one I ever wrote, in my opinion.

This guy has it made in the shade and he tries to screw it up. Good thing he has such a wonderful wife. Well told, entertaining story.

Just to get the laugh and enjoy how a foolish guy can get so close to fucking up a great thing - just by trying to do more than he is capable of - like think!! LOL

and suffer the consequences of doubt and insecurity.

Comedy folks,that's the only real point to this.

Well a husband and wife who adore each other the way they should could be taken out of it,but really it's for laughs.

This is a VERY funny story. Both well written and entertaining. How anyone could turn this into a discussion about guns or Nascar is beyond comprehension. It's a STORY and an entertaining one to boot! Keep up the good work!

This guy is too dumb to live, LOL!

A very content but confused husband and a plain brilliant woman. Sounds like a perfect match to me, as long as his jealousy stops. Nice tale.

Interesting to hear HDK's take on this story. He is such a good writer that he can make a little story about two flawed people who fit together very well a fun read.

I would say from observation that the half of marriages that last are similar to this story. Everyone has their flaws. A successful marriage is two people that work together to tolerate them and make a life full of love. I personally think my wife is beautiful. She would say her legs were too short and her breasts too small. She spends too much money on her girls and keeps me broke a lot...but she is merry and happy all the time. She brings me happiness and pride in providing for her paycheck to pay check. I am still basically broke after 35 years and she is mostly my care giver now. But I wouldn't trade the ride I have had, or my family of college educated and lovely girls for nothing. I suppose I could have been wealthier and had other women, as I was always considered an attractive man. But if we feel we have an attractive mate that adores us for life...what else is there to want? I love your new story

"The Lady in Red." But I agree with you that this story is truly one of your best short tales. You have others I am re-reading as well and they too are cute and funny. Age catches up with us. But I hope you keep on-keep on- writing and entertaining us.

A fan...OldMarineVet- AKA Ronald R Wood

just think of a root canal . TK U MLJ LV NV

I'm usually to serious. My wife thought I was having a convulsion,I was laughing so much.

He had bride eyes and was a great house husband,he was skewed in a great way.

Two flawed people that love each other through and through.

a fun read. Thanks for the offering.

It's always refreshing to find the occasional story about an actual loving wife that is not just another cheating slut.

I've read this a doz times , Love It !

I absolutely have to read this story every time I come across it. Just too damn funny.

The single entity responsible for more gun deaths of innocent citizens in the US than anyother. I guess not surprising given someone who would go to a Simpson concert lol. Always top notch writing and always a fan

You are a truly ignorant and uninformed follower of the Socialist doctrine. There are MILLIONS of high powered weapons in circulation in this country and, percentage wise, almost none of them are ever used in a criminal activity. If you weren't brain dead, you'd be able to figure that out for yourself. Not counting the cases that are covered up, it's a statistical FACT that, each year, far more Americans are killed by DOCTORS than by firearms. What do you UNABLE TO THINK FOR YOURSELF SOCIALIST IDIOTS suggest we do about THAT??

I strongly suggest that all you uninformed assholes sit the fuck down and shut your brainwashed asses the fuck up. The colleges you attended have long been staffed by Communists and Socialists. Do your own research and you'll know that to be true.

THE UNITED STATES OF AMERICA IS A REPUBLIC. Your guaranteed right to own a firearm was intended to prevent people and governments who think like Obama and his corrupt gangsters from MAKING you kiss their asses.

P.S. HDK's story is a 5 star winner.

Thank you for the voice of reason Anonymous 7/14/16

It just gets so tiring the same misinformation over and over and over again that the morons like obama and hillary and their henchmen in the media just keep spewing.

The sheep just lap it up and never question anything these idiots tell them.

Well said.

Funny and sweet. She knows what a great guy she has,he knows what a great gal he has,but neither realizes how perfect they are together.

Lots of smiles while reading this one!

I don't believe it for a minute.

A refreshing change from the usual cheating wife, BTB story. As for the asinine comments about "too many guns", I just consider the source. 5 Stars.

How a very clever, humorous, and quirky romance story about a loving married couple can engender a politically charged debate about gun ownership

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Too bad that most couples cannot do as well. Good story.

....about a clueless guy who not only doesn't know how good he's got it, but in reality doesn't deserve a mate as special as Caroline. And I say that in spite of her protestations to the contrary and her long list of all the wonderful things he does for her and the kids and the community.

I love your humor, and the tale is well told, but I still feel a sense of "is that all there is?" poignancy and a strange aftertaste in my mouth with this one.

If she ever became available, I'd be all over her in a heartbeat (assuming that I was available too)..... ;-)

5*, of course!

This guy is the biggest asshole ever. It's not that he doesn't want to work for someone else, he just doesn't want to work period. Apparently builds things that nobody wants, is supported by his wife and steals money from her when he wants something. Doesn't mater how good looking he is, she needs to dump his sorry ass and let him find out what working for a living is like.

A great young in cheek story that is probably more true than not. Wonderful character development in the back woods style.

Thanks,

Bubba

This is a really cool story, very entertaining. The part I just don’t get is the guy’s desire to go to a Jessica Simpson concert. Even in the highest satirical sense, I just

cannot fathom a grown man wanting to go to a Jessica Simpson concert. The idea of that kind of took the story down a notch or two for me.

I think I first heard "... Bungalow Bill" when I was 9 or 10. I knew what a bungalow was, after all I was in a "portable" classroom called a bungalow at the time. A bungalow was obviously a classroom. So a "classroom Bill" didn't make sense. I must be mishearing it. It must be "Bungling Bill"! So ever since then (40 some odd years) I thought the song was "The Continuing Song of Bungling Bill".

So here is HDK with "Bungalow Bill". I had to check it out on Google. Hmmm.... I've been wrong all this time.

I stand (or in this case sit) corrected.

Still, only a 3-stars for me with this story.

Im glad they have a deep love and think each others bodies are great but its time for husband to find something tangible to do for check. He needs to earn his play money so the other can be saved for family vacation or 401k.

Boy, the NRA thing was a huge turn-off. He can't be much of a man and line up with those cunts.

I'm surprised you included something like that in your story. Controversial hot button subjects like that are better left to Facebook. A video just came out where an NRA big shot is advocating giving 3 yr. olds gun to take to school for protection. The NRA has gone so far off the cliff they're a menace.

This story is not an ode to Jessica Simpson, or the NRA. They are not important to the story. One person wants to know why anyone would want to go to her concert and others worry about donating to the NRA. It was supposed to be part of the humor! This was a humorous tale with a little moral. Somehow readers see the NRA and Jessica Simpson as problems rather than part of the humor. The main character liked them. That was part of his character. He was just a guy! It amazes me that readers come away worrying about politics and entertainers when they read this simple story. It was written in 2009 when Jessica Simpson's appeal was greater and the NRA's lightening rod status was much less, but still?? What the hell is wrong with people that they grab on a very small part of a joke and get bent out of shape? If you met a person that liked Jessica Simpson, or donated to the NRA, or to planned parenthood, would you throw a shit fit? What has the world come to?

Just a note that some of us get it and love the humor and the sweetness of this story. Its one of my favorites because it is simple, funny and filled with a happiness that makes me grin when I read it. I think its hilarious that the husband is not to bright and that it isn't so important for him to be smart because he is a good soul. I love that both the husband and wife are so crazy for each other.

Makes me smile!

Francis_Toliver

I did enjoy it. Almost as funny are some of the comments about the story. Jessica Simpson and the NRA were nothing more than innocent side notes to the story but it seems that they have touched a bigger nerve for some readers. And I think that’s funny.

Ten stars - if one could! What a lovely story about an adorable couple; he thinks she rivals Cleopatra and she and her friends think he's a rugged George Clooney. Too cute how Bill thinks he's fooling Caroline, after pinching $297.00 from her charities' stash to buy tickets to the Jessica Simpson Show. Altogether a wonderful story and so well written. Some comments seem to have missed the whole focus of the story!

Like Caroline would never marry a total worthless idiot like your character Bill. And this comes from a heterosexual male that loves btb stories.

She is a high powered executive and he is a carpenter. Looks wise she is a 5 and he is a 10. She always gushes over her "handsome husband". But the dude is really light on top, but seems like a nice enough guy. He takes care of their kid, kisses her ass, and truly seems to love her. So whatever works. Men have been doing this forever, why not some women.

I knew that this story was going to be a silly parody when Bill got excited about going to a Jessica Simpson concert. I mean, Really? A Jessica Simpson concert? But I gotta admit, it was fun.

Good story about a loving wife. One of your funny stories and very good.

Well written. Believable characters and story line.

As mentioned it made me smile.

But the comments....they made me laugh. So much anger at two minor points.

I know I do.

why did she change her clothes

Just read comments

Oh and chainsaw furniture. Who is buying that even in a good economy. I dont know if the wife left but she should have. Her husband was a loser

I liked it. Good wife, hubby is a lucky guy.

As far as I know NRA means National rifle association. I know that most americans are weapon fanatics and weapon industry is a high profit field in the US. I don't understand why NRA needs donations when the weapon industry has millions of dollar to pay the politicans.

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Seeing a trophy husband.

and very sweet

Would have liked him challenge his brother about why he didn't invite him to the concert.

That boy is an idjit.

A bimbo husband now that's novel and unique. It was hilarious I loved it, I think it really pointed out all the important issues in life. Needless to say 5 stars.

much better than your alternate ending to the poorly conceived and executed recent GA story

I'm still laughing, even after having to log in and getting my password wrong twice. Good story. It is ringing bells in the back of my hand so I guess I must have read it before, must have been at least a week ago, or a year, with my failing memory could have been earlier this morning. Still good though.

Now that was a great story!