All Comments on 'Contract Killer Wins the Game'

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jack

Enjoyed the plot line. I enjoy stories that provide sex and a plot line.

This story is the first of its kind that I've come across. Black humour at its damn, bloody (pardon the pun) finest. One on hand, we have the cast of characters who think solely with dicks (or guns) and the other, we have witty metaphors galore. It qualifies as both Humour as well as monumentally-fucked-up-train-wreck (someone should make a category for it :P).

I have only one teensy criticism. You may want to reorder the series so the different chapters are in sequence. I did not appreciate having to look through the first few paragraphs to see if it was a continuation of the last thing I read.

Nevertheless, thou hast earned thy place in my favourites list. If you have written more like this and hidden it from view, thou shalt be damned to eternal torture. Seriously dude, you have a wicked talent for this shit.

I don't often read entire novels in one sitting, but I was glad to make the exception here. Someone could easily make a hit graphic novel out of it *take the fucking hint* and it would be worthy of Alan Moore or Frank Miller.

At the end of it all, I was slightly let down by the soap-ish ending *pout pout* Black humour deserves an ending which is suitably.... well... black. Oh well, you can say I'm sour graping because I liked the rest of the story THAT much.

I dropped a subtle clue in this comment, but in case it eluded you, here it is spelled out in huge block letters.

<slightly unsubtle clue>

WRITE MORE, YOU TWISTED MANIACAL BLOODY GENIUS!!

</slightly unsubtle clue>

Salutes

-LaRascasse (aka the fan of yours the shit will never hit).

My only regret is finding Contract Killer Gets a Clue first then finding out there were previous chapters. Great read.

But I then read the entire set in one sitting and I LOVE it.

5 stars for each story, would not rate anything better. Good characters, good twists.

Wouldn't mind a follow up with both women in his bed, Sheila running the show.

Now I need to read your other stories.

Ramjet

Nice