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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
eek....

who wrote this shit?....certainly NOT the same person who wrote "mother's milk"...where did you come up with kevin's accent?...COMPLETELY unbelievable...

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 8 years ago
Very good.

I hope you have written a follow up chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Geeks don't actually talk like that.

His dialect was so aggravating I couldn't read any more.

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