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by chocolatecookie3

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SatyrDickSatyrDick10 months ago

[09.07.23]

Ssssssmmmmmmooookkkiin'!

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Yes yes yes

This is sexy. She's nervous but she wants it and they both enjoy it. More please!!!

LSEilandLSEilandabout 11 years ago
Great Start

This story is like a teaser. You could turn it into a series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I Really Really Liked it

You did a very good job. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!!!!!

William smythWilliam smythover 11 years ago
An awesome debut

What a welcome addition to Literotica!

Three great storues already.

More to come soon I hope.

popparazzipopparazziover 11 years ago
Nice

Interesting start,looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice first submission

A very good first submission. Hope your working on your second one. You might try writing about a shared wife. That always goes over good. good luck.

HoldingStacieDownHoldingStacieDownover 11 years ago
Good start.

I liked this first chapter .Can't wait to read more .

clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycover 11 years ago
Hot story.

Hope there is more coming. Thanx for your submission.

DDH3269DDH3269over 11 years ago
a fellow Hoosier approves

My imagination soars when i see that an author is from Indiana. Well-written and tastefully done. I look forward to to your next offering and my imagining.......

CoCoNiy101CoCoNiy101over 11 years ago
Good job

Sweet yet still pretty hot

symtronsymtronover 11 years ago
Agreed...good start

The storyline is great, with lots of room to expand...Please continue

masterslave00masterslave00over 11 years ago
Good start...

I really liked it. Keep writing...

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