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by AZsunshine2015

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good concept, but....

....you need an editor. Very frustrating having you switch between 1st person and 3rd person in the story. 3*

AZsunshine2015AZsunshine2015over 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you for the editor suggestion. I will use one with my next submission. Thanks for reading. Thank you for the feedback.

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