All Comments on 'Convention Hotel Sex'

by JBEdwards

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 4 years ago

It sounds like your hero knows how to sell a young hottie a complete bill of goods!

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesalmost 4 years ago
A tall tale

A tall tale about some very nice small tail, Tiffany, that got herself some nice lodgings at a Marriot by trading her hot body for them. She kind of sold her body. No, that's not true! She didn't "kind of" sell her body, she explicitly and intentionally sold her body! But, unlike women that do that more frequently because it's their profession, she kissed to get the ball rolling (or our hero's balls boiling if you prefer). We shouldn't be surprised about how she acted and what happened. After all, it was a convention! Hot! Erotic! Great story! Five stars!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Location question

I liked the story, but you need to figure out whether they are in New York or Chicago. You talk about New York at the beginning of the story with her AirBNB being in the South Bronx. Then you finish with them in Chicago.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Hi, Anonymous (Location question),

I know I did that. LegsFeetToes also pointed that out to me, privately. I have no excuse, other than that I'm an idiot. I do proofread my stories, but more for spelling, grammar, and style. I have to begin proofreading them for content, too! Chicago and New York are two of my favorite American cities, anyway. My humble apologies, JB Edwards

PS: I'm very glad you like the story!

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 4 years ago
Fun!

She knows what she wants...and how to get it. :+))

New York? Chicago? Doesn't matter. A Marriott is a Marriott.

She knows exactly where she is.

WittonWittonalmost 3 years ago

Great story by one of the best - I don't believe there can be a "best" where there are so many different styles - on this site

The proofreading omission as to the location of this story is unimportant - a convention is a convention

Pippa76Pippa76over 1 year ago

5 very deserving stars sir. Well done to you for getting me wet X.

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