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All Comments on 'Convince Me'

by Rallynoangels

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Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 4 years ago

Excellent. A new story line - very nice!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Chapter 2

In the works?

Hopefully..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Please use an editor.......

Omart57Omart57about 4 years ago
Very good-

sexy fun and light heart-ed!

lantern04lantern04about 4 years ago
Good start.

I'd enjoy seeing more to this story.

thedayafterthedayafterabout 4 years ago

Really liked it, novel story line. Hope there's a follow up

TJSkywindTJSkywindabout 4 years ago

Several mistakes and wrong words (enough to nearly ding a star), but still readable and amusing. Spellcheck will help a lot.

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

AethrosAethrosabout 4 years ago
Can't wait for part 2

Really enjoyed this piece, can't wait to see what happens with that last command

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Good, Fun, But Watch The Spelling

"He looses sleep..."

It's 'lose', not 'loose'

Irishbear03Irishbear03over 3 years ago
Great story so far

Hope to see a part 2 soon.

DocWordsDocWordsover 2 years ago

Good story. Well crafted.

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