All Comments on 'Cooking for One'

I love meatloaf!! with a little loving on the side. Good read. Thanks for sharing.

I loved it. I do need a new meatloaf recipe! But the dessert; a must! I want to form a coop. Chef Chrissy

Another good one, Joe!

Good start and looking forward to more developments

"Jim arrived at Gail's door at 4:30 as preplanned"

Looking for the early bird special, such a senior move. We do the same thing.

Always good to read your stories Joe, and this was fun. Sometimes I feel you write as if you’re reporting the events rather than being part of them, and this one was a bit further in that mode. Your story and your style, but I think up you would gain in interest and excitement if you could shift a little. Either way, thanks for continuing to support the ‘sex for oldies’ movement, and looking forward to the next.

To the Anonymous commenter. Who claimed that I write as if I’m reporting the events rather than being in them.

I tend to write in third person omnipresent as opposed to first person narrative. With first person narrative, as you suggest, one would only see what that one person sees and feels. I know that a few Lit writers use it, but it is one dimensional and lacks depth and that is why the majority of Lit writers, who have more than just a few stories published, don’t use it.

Thank you for liking my work.

I like it! Hopefully it'll become a series

Great story,well written and very arousing.