All Comments on 'Cooking Lessons'

Tres Bien!

Get an editor

Somehow I'm glad Michael never did have full sex with Jeanette. It would have spoiled the image of the super worldly, yet devoted sexual being that she was. She gave Michael a thrill and great advice and although I, too would have liked it if he had at least spoken to her again, it was very satisfying and worthy of the 5* I, and half the other readers, gave it. And, if all one of the anon's could only come up with the comment that an editor was needed, then I feel sorry for him/her.

More of a 'first time' or 'mature' story.

There is no spelling mistakes in your French words... except the accents.

Not dramatic for the story, but for your information:

Don't forget, French language has a lot of Accented and umlauted vowels.

... Le voilà, mais bien sûr, très belle, très bon ...

Just a free online-translator can help you for these few words.

I appreciate the comments with the exception of the one suggesting I kill myself. I think I will defer on that suggestion. The others are quite valuable. I am thinking about a sequel that picks up on my main character (Michael) after college. We'll see.

I almost missed this, but "femdom" in the summary pulled me in. Ignore the trolls;this was the well written and I hope to see more from you. (5)

But the sex really didn't live up to its potential -- not for me, at least.

The whole idea of feminizing him just didn't do it.

And there sure wasn't enough sexual preliminaries/foreplay -- not enough of him playing with her, and certainly not enough of her playing with him.

Sadly, gave it three stars.