by Nicequip
Really hope you write more of this story, it should get a good ending.
I read this story several years ago and thought it was pretty good. After reading it the second time, I got to thinking about who I could have done that too. Really good read. !!!
Can we have an update soon? I hope we don't have to wait much longer, this is a superb story and over a year since this part was posted. I want to know what's next or what the timeline is for the next part's release.
Nice work! Your style is nothing if not entertaining. Keep ‘em cumming. Thanks!!
Fantastic and amazing series! I can't get enough of it and reread both parts frequently! I hope part 3 comes out soon...
This is a great story, well written and fun to read.
I'm really looking forward to future chapters, if there'll be any.
In any case, thank you a lot for Dannys adventures so far.
Damn, This was so good that I REALLY hated to see it end. I do, however recognize an ending when I read one. However you did leave room for a reboot.
So I have some meager hope for a continuation. Five or so years down the line when Danny has graduated University, with high Honours along with the others. Daddy Cooper could start agonizing over his one great lost, and seek a final rematch. Of course all four of the kids are now married, his natural son to his gorgeous beard, and Dad's and anybodies fucktoy. Danny to his daughter in an unusual but happy marriage. The Cooper Mom is still addicted to cum, as is the former bully son. Danny's Mother is now Mr. Coopers primary sex on the side.
Anyway, Daddy Cooper thinks he has a new advantage as everyone gets positions in his still growing conglomerate. Perhaps he opened a branch in Mexico, and the local manager took him to see a dog and donkey show. I'm sure Jason/Janice will adore dog and pony yummy cummies. Libby will, of course adore Great Dane dick and it's gigantic knot.
Now what could the renewed bet be? Perhaps what positions the younger generation get in the Cooper Co.? Danny EVP and designated successor.
Jason/Janice could work the new Cororate glory hole.
PLEASE WRITE a renewal of this story!!
Thank you for sharing your talent with we your readers.
amy, a writer elsewhere
Easily the best story on here think it’s brilliant begging you to bring back another series so loved Danny and his whores lol 😂
Unfinished Does Danny keep Mandy. Does he give Jason a Child threw Beth? and what of Mrs. Cooper does she get over her case of Yummie's and does Danny and Mom move into the Cooper house and Drive Jason even nuttier. while his woman leads him by the balls.
Story is too good to not keep it going. Please add to it!
Nicequip said in an earlier number of posts part three was nearly complete, is he alive or dead?
Guys what the fuck happened to nicequip?? He hasn't uploaded or updated his stories in like forever?! I'm starting to think something bad happened to him.... I saw he posted Cooper family pride in another website and he was selling this but there hasn't been any progress of him from there. He said part 3 was almost done like almost 1 year ago?? It's been a year since he last updated any of his story's at all??? Are any of you his fans not gonna say anything???
The first story was good but I didn’t feel as if you were punishing Mr. Cooper. You let him fuck his wife and daughter and his son’s girlfriend. He was losing the bets but that wasn’t a big deal because he could afford it. Now, in your second story, you fucked it up because you take about the wife orgasm really hard on her husband’s cock. That made it seem as if Danny’s cock really as big as you made it out to be in the beginning. Then when it came to the fuck hole. You said almost all of Jason’s friends had huge cocks. So,I don’t know who has the biggest cock, Danny or Jason’s friends. When I finished the story. I felt as if Mr. Cooper ended up happier than he was before the contest started.
Part 1 was great and so was part 2, I hope that there will be many more to come. 10/10
Funny as shit too. Deserves at least one more chapter if not more.
so did his mom make hin put up with his abusive good for nothing father just so she could get her rocks off? Kind of cold hearted.
As much as I loved the story and hoped for a chapter three, I don't think that it's in the cards. This chapter was published a year and a half ago and it's the last thing the author posted. Too bad. I wanted to see Danny's mom take on the Cooper women and Beth!
So what the hell happened to nicequip??? Last time edited anything was 2018 and its now 2020??? What happens to Bedford?? I see he published this on smashswords but that's it
LOVED IT. BOTH PARTS. AUTHOR HAS A GOOD HEAD FOR WRITING THE BIZARRE. IT WAS FUNNIER THAN ALL GET OUT! SORRY THE AUTHOR IS INACTIVE, TOO BAD! THANKS Nicequip
What's next? I saw Nicequip updated his page, but no clue as to if he's going to post anything new. I hope he doesn't leave us hanging here in a series that is so far just as great as his Novelist series.
I have enjoyed this story a lot and I hope that there is a part 3.
Yes, thank you for your engaging and delightful story. Like others, would appreciate more in this line of thought.
I loved the story and I hope there's more. I'd love it if the "girls" got pregnant with Danny's babies and Beth got pregnant to Greg and maybe she could encourage him to hatefuck Jason to destress occasionally before he fucks her. I'd love it if Danny and his Mum both moved in to the Cooper house and Danny was made a major partner in the company without any expectations that he'd have to work. And maybe he could add the Mothers and sisters of his other tormentors to his growing harem of cumdump breeders.
As written in Oliver Twist, "Please, sir, can I some more?" but instead of I, how about, "Please, sir, can we have some more?"
Is there another story that's like this? The 'similar stories' are more inline with the same tags than the actual same story
Great read love the dynamics. This needs finishing over another couple of installments.
Author it was really thrilling ..but can we have part3 too ..how will everyone end up ..
So in chapter #1 You said it was a Three part story where is the Finish. Does Danny Dugan make the Ultimate Bet and impregnate Mrs. Cooper & Beth letting Jason take credit for Beth? as far as Mandy is concerned does she goto college with him along with his Mom. You have a ton of Readers that want to know.
This spunky underdog story has a bit of everything, and it needs a fitting ending - the first one was good, the second one better, and I know the climax will be earth-shattering! Bring it on!
Part 3...How about a senior trip where Greg and Jason are caught being dominated by the principal and football coach, while Danny and his mother have some fun with the cheerleaders while the football team is limp until they're screwing with each other. Have Greg signing everything over to Danny and his mother to take care everything while he commits Jason to the loony bin and Greg confessing to numerous crimes whereupon Jason and Greg end up servicing the employees and resident/inmates at their respective facilities where Danny and his wife (Mandy) and his submissives (Beth and Lori) routinely visit them and torment them with sex shows or other activities to taunt them and to make more mental changes to the two Coopers, to the point of truly teaching them a lesson.
Are there any other series as long as this one with the same relationships and activities? I've read the Novelist, Six Times a Day, Measuring My Cum, and others, but few as good as this series.
Absaloutly awesome bit of storytelling , the manipulation and story are fantastic
First time I have read something this all round good for a long time .. please keep it going ...
with all the folks who want a third chapter -- it needs something to wrap it up. That said, good work so far!
I've read both chapters several times. Great story. Can't wait for chapter 3.
So fucking funny. You are killing me! Keep it up....like Danny does! :-)
I rarely read pieces this long but this is masterfully done, where most authors skip few days you explain in detail what it would be to control minds and fuck plenty of beauties daily. And youre great at that
Come on, come on, come on, come on!!!
How about another chapter...?
Absolutely LOVE this story... Each time I've read it...
I've read this story and the Novelist over two dozen times waiting for new stuff from Nicequip, I'm wondering if it's a lost cause?
Dunno how I feel about Beth being a common whore for the masses. She was a minor problem for Danny in that Jason was a mega cunt. Making her fuck any dick with a pulse is a lot meh. But it all depends on part 3 and the downfall of Greg and Jason.
More foreshadowing, less follow through. One expected Team Dugan vs Team Cooper, Greg on Lori, Jason redeeming himself with Beth, while Libby and Mandy double team Danny. Not so much the coup de grace of Lori, Danny, and Beth moving in to be with Lori in the spare bedroom, Danny with Mandy, and Beth with Jason. Soon Lori dethrones Libby, taking her place in the marriage bed, while Danny's Dad returns from the Amazon, in touch with his inner shaman, able to do his own mental manipulations. What happens to Danny when he must face his physical and mental equal, under what he thought was his own roof?
The story as written still stands on it's own, and the venture into bisexuality still fits into a femdom/cuckold lifestyle. Regardless of my musings, it is only what Nicequip wishes to tell us, how Nicequip listens to what the characters have to tell us, and how Nicequip chooses to do that. In the end, Nicequip does a good job of those things. The story is entertaining, and in the end, that is all that matters.
I like the story nice twists in the story. Also some good laffs at how things are done. Hope there is more cumming
This is easily one of the best stories i ever read. I really wish there was another chapeter.
This is such a funny story. So many little details, I love it. Hope you get the next part done soon.
Y'all the author quit writing and won't be continuing this and all his stories
This was the best story i have had the pleasure to read, cannot wait for the next chapter, just hope there will be one soon.
Wanted Dead or Alive? Lost, Forgotten, Hospitalized, Missing in Action, what? We're dying for the third installment, given Coronavirus, I would have expected many of the authors to be pumping out stories as much as a politician opens their mouth and pumps out bull.
Please come back and finish the story it’s way too good to leave unfinished! I like how Danny has really put a ton of thought into his revenge plan. He seems to have it so meticulously documented. I’m wondering what the end result was big will he fuck the Cooper family broke, Will he end up marrying Mandy, and become the heir-apparent to Cooper enterprises, now that Jason is cum guzzling cock whore.
I need more, please continue on with the story I hate being left in suspense…
Damn, this was awesome! But it's really missing an ending or at least a new entry. Please Nicequip, return! Or train someone to take up your good work ;)
do you have anyone original book? if I buy the book, is it have more chapters?
Smashwords only shows two books for this story matching the two entries here, so I assume there's not any new chapters to purchase yet.
Oliver Twist has nothing on Nicequip's loyal readers, we ALL want some more. Nicequip is like the master in Dickens' Oliver Twist and we're all Oliver Twist asking "Please, sir, I want some more."
Fuck this story is hot as fuck. Includes just about every one of my kink triggers. Got a raw dick at the moment. Goddamn I said goddamn!!!
I would love to see what happens next. I sincerely hope that you will continue with this story
I would love to see more of this story, unfortunately I don’t think we will as it has been 3 years since this author has submitted anything.
This really requires a few more chapters in order to draw the story to it’s logical conclusion!
Part 3 Mandy and libby get impregnated jason becomes a true femboy and Greg supports it all with his money
Well thought out, well written and a great story.
Although I found some parts not to my taste, it all blends in and has its own logic
Well done and looking forward to part 3 etc
It's been a few years since part 2 was wrote. But iv'e read this story several times. Would love to see a part 3. More about Jason's [Janice's] training. Mandy and Beth is impregnated by Danny and maybe his mother and Mrs. Copper also.
Amazing story. Absurd yet very funny and well written. I hope you got another part coming.
Bummer... four years since the author last uploaded something. Guess the story is over.
You’ve got such a fucked up mind , I just loved this story so I must be just as fucked up as you.. What a crying shame you didn’t continue on there’s soooo much more you can do. I was really expecting him to actually to take ownership of Cooper mansion and business plus add to his harem and turn the whole football team into full time gays and make them fuck each other. my god there’s so many ways you can go with this story..anyway thanks for giving us something outrageous different ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
What a completely self-indulgent, disgusting and fucked up story...
It's exactly why I read shit on here. Absolutely love it hope you eventually finish it off
This story is so over the top! Every time Mr. Cooper talks, I imagine the voice of Grunkle Stan from “Gravity Falls”.
I see you haven't written anything for a few years but I wish you would pick up on this story and continue it.
Excellent tale! Plotting was on point. Revenge, humor, love, submission, new-found confidence, sexual awakening, this story oozes sensuality. The dream sequences are hilarious.
This is a well written story and I could easily identify and insert myself as any of the characters. You know a story is good when you feel a part of it.
I have to say that part 1 was much better, but it was a good story, a part 3 would be great. I would like to ask my fellow readers if anyone knows the story of the pendent? If you know, could you tell me the author's name or where I can read it in full?