All Comments on 'Coping Mechanisms: Living a Memory'

by SaphirBlack

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Hank60Hank60about 3 years ago

Powerful, loved the way you delved into the head of each of the characters...Didn't think I was turned on by non-consent, rape...now I have to re-think that. I am, indeed turned on by your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nothing sexy or erotic about this mess

Go somewhere else if you want to lecture

Thepie33Thepie33over 8 years ago
Amazing

This was hot for sure, the way she gave herself and he played into it calling her out on being a filthy little slut for him. I love how you told the stories at the same time

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Stunning

just stunning

kris10ekris10eover 8 years ago
Wow!

A powerhouse of emotion!! I actually enjoyed the recap of the first experience and can't wait to see how all of this transpires. Thank you for sharing. You are now added...I just hope it's not a waste, and that you continue on. It such a Great begining.

bearsladybearsladyover 8 years ago
I agree....

extremely intense. No arousal, just total focus, repulsed and some curiosity of where this would go. If that was your intent with this chapter, you nailed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow. That was intense.

Totally killed my erection but kept my attention. I wonder how her father feels about raping his daughter? Does he feel guilt or triumph? And how about Todd or the mother?

Can't wait for the next chapter.

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