by Giveandgetoral
nice story. well written, interesting characters and good dialogue. and hot!
Great story...I would love to find out what happens next, and hopefully it includes alot of oral from both characters.
I like the way you slowly let events unfold instead of jumping to the sex. The journey is just as important as the destination :)
I only wish you keep writing. Your style is fast above just about every other writer in the sure. Your use of mutual commentary by the characters is so well done. I've only noticed one tiny grammatical error in a different story. Bravo