All Comments on 'Coral Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I like it

I like how she teases him and threatens more. Good work.

mitch3821mitch3821over 16 years agoAuthor
Update

Tweaking Chapter 3 now. It should be out within the next few weeks - very busy.

mitch3821mitch3821over 16 years agoAuthor
Final Chapter soon

The final chapter has been submitted. It usually takes a week to post. Better than waiting another 2 years I'm sure.

robert0000robert0000almost 8 years ago
Nice story

I like her exploitation of his vulnerability. Good job.

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