by Greyman01
We need at least 3 to 4 more chapters. If I had a boss like this when i was working i would have eaten and fucked her every time we were together.
5 stars.
I want to work for Diane White! Please write more about her mentoring. How often does she taste the Tightie Whities? How often do they taste her?
A story is a "What If" that has stakes as in something to lose and something to gain. There's none of that in here.
This is "The Firm" without the stakes. Corporations are terrified of sexual harassment claims and this woman acting like she did (he could have recorded this with his phone--he should have). Rampant sex with your colleagues that you are competing with to get a job? Seriously? They claim rape or aggression, and you're toast.
Also way too much preamble to Miss Hot Stuff showing up. Vanilla character that's a stereotype. Watch The Devil Wears Prada for an example of what you're looking for. There was no sex in that story, but the stakes were high, and it became a battle of wills in that movie. In this story, our hero is James Bond with the big dick, never makes a mistake. Boring.
Not sure what so much training accomplishes, but the rewards would have made keeping eyes open and partially awake. Where was this department when I started working.
Very yummy indeed... The ending seemed off timed, but still a good start. Thank you!
Really well written, hot but polite and really well thought. Sexy! Keep up the good work...
Really interesting...they're a bunch of bonobos...! Like this...
A remark made to me shortly after I got a top position after I got out of college stuck with me...
don't get your meat where you make your bread-thought it was on the money
if things go south low person always going to be the one out in the street
think it's hilarious she had her White'ies report back to her, in detail...
did she buy him a new tie...?