All Comments on 'Corporate Espionage Ch. 03'

A nice treat and a change of pace. Nicely written

Glad to see you are back at it. Both of your series are pretty darn good.

Been waiting to see if you'd continue this, and I'm glad to see another great chapter. I do wish there was more time dedicated to Daniel playing around with controlling and impersonating both sisters, but that's just my selfish request. Keep it up!

All these short episodes are like a TV series episode finally building toward a series .Hope in next episodes we get to know background of daniel and his boss.

Keep writing and please don't make us wait for long also I want you to introduce a villain in story

I liked this chapter best.