All Comments on 'Cortana Becomes Sentient'

Absoloutely loved it. Definitely could use a second pt.

Really good story and attention to detail of how androids would act and the development for making them better.

I may just be one comment but please consider making another chapter! It would be interesting seeing how Cortana grows and how Peter changes too.

Nice

Good story! AI has always interested me. The structure and flow were equally balanced for peaking the curiosity of the reader and the end very satisfactory.

Amber

Kinda lame... He's smart enough to create that last and most powerful human endeavor but too stupid to see the clues or even investigate it?... Yeah, no.