All Comments on 'Cosmic Retribution: A Sissy's Story Pt. 02'

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crven_bancrven_banalmost 4 years ago
Potential

I think this story has a potential, not so good rating is just bcs you are publishing a page at a time of what seams to be not so fast paced story/beginning of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Novella

A good start to the story but where is the rest of this novella

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Hot as fuck

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Veronica_E_DayVeronica_E_Dayabout 2 years ago

The story has an exceptionally good storyline, well written with outstanding character development while retaining interest. Eric, the main character, is adorable and most people can easily relate.

Unfortunately, The next chapter was to have been posted over two years ago so it seems that this story may never be completed.

Veronica

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