by LynnGKS
Read halfway through and then stopped reading. I really couldn't care how the story ended up. If you wanted to write a story about three people to dislike? then you have done so.
I read the story right through, and thoroughly enjoyed it. I think there are women like her in the real world, pity I haven't met one yet !
Interesting premise, but the best part was the conversations with the fiancee and her cool headed approach to reality on the jobs issue. I know some people do not like your stories and I don't like all of them, but this one was enjoyable.
None of the characters is very likable. They are alll morally bankrupt. The premise is ridiculously weak. Sexual harassment is taken VERY seriously by every decent size company. All he would need to do is get a small digital recorder and tape BB propositioning him and she would be toast, no matter how good a businesswoman she was. And he and his wife to be would be almost impossible to fire.
I liked your originality as well as your writing. Thank you for the entertainment.
Great story, one of the best I've read on here. Keep up the good work
That was great fun to read. Definately a woman I could look in the eye and enjoy. Might even offer her a meal.
I have read several of your stories and this is one of the best so far. Keep up the good work.
I liked it a lot, great sex and great humor. Betty's angst was so over the top it was hilarious. The last line about her still winking at him when he catches her doing kegels at her desk was the perfect ending.
Fun story, well written and sensually erotc. Sounds like the boss we all dream about. Looking forward to Chapt 2
Loved the story and the second part was a fresh twist. Good flow in the text and a joy to read.
Cheers
The problem I have with most of these types of stories are the glaring lapses in logic. No-one, man or woman would try to browbeat their employees into sex or face being fired. Why, you ask? LAWSUITS. Companies don't want managers who do crap like this because it is the company that inevitably suffers, and I'm talking millions.
You might argue that because she's a woman that somehow magically protects her from sexual harassment suits. Not fucking likely! Corporations will tolerate managers who are rude, crude, lazy, irresponsible, and many other failings. However, sexual harassment or coercion is one sure-fire way to get the axe. Pun intended. She might get away with it for a little while, but eventually someone is going to cry foul and her career is history.
I can only conclude that the people who write these tales have never actually worked in an office, at least not since the 80's.
Enjoyed reading this! The dominant in the office, submissive in the bedroom thing appealed to me :)