by HotwifeSTL
You have a story here I'd enjoy seeing you build upon. The gamey picture was great, but I did not feel remorse from Matt upon finding out she was back to her premarital habits.
Also this could have been more cutting:
[Kathryn: I'm sorry. It's a house party. It's pretty crazy but it's a lot of fun! Don't you want to know what I've been doing at the party? Becca and I are the only girls here...]
using this:
[Kathryn: Sorry. It's a house party. Pretty crazy but fun! Do you need me to tell what I've been doing at the party? Becca and I are only girls here]
Thanks for sharing and I hope future works paint an image so lusty as her picture in this story did!