All Comments on 'Country Club Slut - Mardi Gras'

by HotwifeSTL

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Danno_61455Danno_61455almost 4 years ago

You have a story here I'd enjoy seeing you build upon. The gamey picture was great, but I did not feel remorse from Matt upon finding out she was back to her premarital habits.

Also this could have been more cutting:

[Kathryn: I'm sorry. It's a house party. It's pretty crazy but it's a lot of fun! Don't you want to know what I've been doing at the party? Becca and I are the only girls here...]

using this:

[Kathryn: Sorry. It's a house party. Pretty crazy but fun! Do you need me to tell what I've been doing at the party? Becca and I are only girls here]

Thanks for sharing and I hope future works paint an image so lusty as her picture in this story did!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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A True Slut and Cluck Story .. Not My Type of Story

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