by thornapple
Ignore the up-tight comments of the earlier review. Well developed realistic story. Been there, done that, & we were enriched, not injured. Thanks again.
Well written. Maybe a little predictable, but still very sexy and able to hold reader's interest. Like your writing.Please keep up the good work!!!
Fantasy only because not enough people have a Farm. We lived the story around a massage table, 6 close dinner friends with a green velour blanket (to provide the 'back yard grass' as a 'fuck' mat. Use your imagination! The host offered the massage as a hook to build interest, a towel provides the modesty comfort zone making the offered 'door prize' a functional option for either male or female winner. The soft velour blanket spread as the center piece in the den after the third dinner was easy to find willing partners ... Considering you know 3, friendly and very close, teasing couples ... who willingly visualize well place hints. Who needs a farm? But the story theme was ideal, and stands the test of time. Well done Thornapple.
I was really looking forward to the 3 wives being strung up side by side with the husbands having their way with all of them simultaneously. You did such a good job with those one on one scenes.
Also I was waiting for the women to hook up with each other and together as a group at the farm as well.
Perhaps a short sequel. I'd love that.