by Werner7890
Well written and best of all a good old fashion tale of lust and fulfillment. Enjoyable and to second the other comment - MORE
It's a good story and takes me back many years to a few different instances, of which I am pleased to have experienced, so Thank you. As to a continuation... it would be welcomed, so long as there is meaning added to their lives by a relationship.
I will be looking for more stories from this author. Well done!
This is serendipity for both Jeff, Lynn, and all of us readers!
Continue great work !!!
5* from me. I think It’s a very enjoyable story. I enjoy the way you developed the characters in such a short story. I can feel Jeff’s disappointment and despair.
As a very minor criticism, please be careful to always start a new paragraph when a new speaker speaks, so the slow-witted reader like me can keep up.
Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.
The problem is that there's only one other story by this author available and I've read it already. C'mon - get busy and add to your collection.
Thanks for deftly writing a story that any of us would welcome to happen.
Your grammar and the way you wove your personal dialog into the story, along with the excellent condition of your writing, made for an enjoyable read.
Dear Author, Loved the "antique" story. Unique, well written story with two engaging characters. Truly, would like to see this story line expanded. Thank you for the very enjoyable pre love story. 5* all the way. jntiques
I loved every word, I loved the characters and it left me with a warm feeling, unlike most stories. 5* This Author needs to write more, it would be a shame to lose her. {I have read the profile and it gives no clues to what sex they are] But only a woman could write a warm loving story like that lol
Nothing like country sex. Even if there dad catches u in the hay loft fucking his horny daughter. Him shooting at u running across the field naked dodging buck shot.
I like the set up, the tease, the flirting and the well-described fucking. Good work.
The writer sets the younger male as a wandering antique seeker who finds an older fit woman. She takes him for a tour of her property, and this was a believable scenario for sex. She already had thoughts of him and he displayed his intentions. The bumping was to make initial physical contact. After that it was what do we want as sexual interaction. I have an understanding of what women will do to seduce a man. Men need to learn seduction is flattering and her way of saying “I want you to do things for me”.
I've said it before, there's nothing sexy as a young man satisfying an older woman and filling her mature womb with his young seed. Brings back memories of an older woman back in the late '50's picking me up and taking me to a drive-in theater and taking my virginity. Memories last forever.
If the next part is another story, let's see it then. This was hot, I'd love to read more.