All Comments on 'Couple have Threesome'

Please get an editor. The premise of the story was good, but, unreadable.

Sorry but I couldn't read your 'wham, bam thank you Mam' story. The spelling and grammar were all over the place. The word you should be using is our as in 'our room' not are. No plot or finesse. You need an editor at the very least.

I spent too much time deciphering the words to even begin to enjoy this. The premise was good but the spelling, incorrect word use and sentence structure ruined it.

Evah_Rheddy

Terrible spelling and grammar!!!