All Comments on 'Couple Plays with Mature Neighbours Pt. 01'

Your story is well written and promises much action. It is also plausible and I look forward to the next chapter, well done and thank you.

awaiting for next chapter

Out it is beautifully written and my pussy started getting wet and my panties were soaking wet.waiting for rest of story. Rinakrishna3@yahoo.co.in

I have enjoyed your quick story. My particular taste run towards revealing characters thru writing about them and interaction between people in the work. A few opening paragraphs used as a story setup lacks the, Hemingway-ish if you will, style of delivery.

Now I am not saying anything derogatory about your work. It was sexy and quick. It works. However it would also make an excellent broad based outline for something longer which was done in a different way.

looking forward to more