by Riley196730309
It was a very nice story, but it went too fast. Perhaps a bit more character development, a bit more detail, a bit more discussion about what the husband and wife were feeling. But it was a nice story.
It was a very nice story, but it went too fast. Perhaps a bit more character development, a bit more detail, a bit more discussion about what the husband and wife were feeling. But it was a nice story.
Hey guy. The massage story - same as this - has been posted here a thousand times. What's different about your version? Frankly, not much, not much at all. So give me a minute to say something: these massage stories depict the professionals in that business as prostitutes. That's exactly the image your story conveys, and that's not fair. I have had many a full body massage and have never once been confronted with a sexual situation, and I guarantee you my body is 1000X better than the imagineray figure in this 'tale'.
You want to depict your wife as a whore who fucks the massage therapist? Why?
Is it a mandate of late? New writers - Gleefully give up their wife and mother of their(?) children to some dirty cock to watch her get fucked then decide you might as well get some too.
Pimping out wifie poo without any prior conversation tells us she has been looking for a cock to satisfy her for some time and it ain't you wimpo. And you have looked to watch her new cock for some time.
This is unfortunate for the children regardless of who the father is.
Now then knowing all that what was erotic about your whore and her weak pimp???
. . .those folks who don't like (or say they don't, at least) wife sharing stories would go away?
That is the general theme of this genra, so they must really get off slamming authors who post in Loving Wives. Is there another class of story that has such a devoted "I hate the theme" following?
I know how hard it is to write a story that's internally consistant and appreciate your efforts. It's not the hottest story in the class, but a nice effort. Thanks for posting it. TJ1
it was a really nice, quick read and your first story so well done. I almost didnt want the sex to happen though. Was most turned on during the build up.
This is more of the same of wife laughs at husband and has sex with what pleases her. Stupid stuff from people who have know idea about marriage or love. Just masterbation in the brain.
Who is the idiot that calls Loving wives the sharing genre. What an idiot, this is not Group sex or Erotic couplings. I guess some people feel sharing is loving and wimps are ok as long as they get seconds or thirds.
Loving Wives is about cheating and the consequences or a true loving wife. I guess jerking off is love to these idiots.
What's with all of these self-righteous, right-wing Republican nut jobs reading Literotica anyway? Aren't you all supposed to be going to church in your continued quest to chage America from a democracy to a theocracy? Loving wives is what people define it themselves! Not the typical, arrogant belief of a "conservative" that this is how I see things, and dammit, everyone else will comply with the way I see things too!!! MORONS!!
If this story had seductive build-up, it would have been a lot better. But the spontenaity of it made it fun.
,,, really enjoyable ... please write a series of massage stories .. Thanks
add something like mark starting to touch julie's breasts instead of immediately jumping to them having sex. the story is extremely short...make it more interesting 😴
Great story and I think there’s more to come as your couple become more at ease.
Lol not sure why this story is getting so much hate. Great story. Not too long not too short. Straight to the point. Some people are just incapable of using their imagination and instead have to be told every detail. Good job