by heg91
This story is about Dom sub control and strong women who surrender for a small time.
It has to develop as the author says.
More to come.
Really good start
I will be looking for future installments
Thank you
Very nice work. I do hope you do not stop there. I found myself getting angry at Mr. Too Much Control but still excited at the same time. I really enjoyed this start..
Perfect beginning. Has the potential to be one of my favourites. Please write more.
I really appreciate that "building atmosphere through detailed picture of background" approach. People are maybe sometimes too lazy to read beginning with no direct sexual content, but concerning the whole feeling, it should be essential. Please, continue doing it this way. You´re truly talented.