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Click hereAs Kaitlyn passed by and gave me a smile, I was thankful for the twist of fate that had reunited her and I on that Brisbane to Melbourne flight several months ago, and that she had overcome difficulties earlier in her life and grown from the naïve home-schooled girl and the subsequent awful rebel teenager she had been and grown into this wonderful young woman. I knew that Kaitlyn and I had a lot of good times ahead of us in the future.
THE END - PLEASE RATE & COMMENT
Is it the stigma of being with a cousin romance that is driving this story? Seems like a weird question but I ask as it is legal in Australia to marry your cousin, even first cousins. But that does not mean it does not have a stigma attached to it and might cause an uproar in the family.
Nice, but far to much reminiscencing in the early pages plus the prolonged travelog.
The connection between the two was too short given this was an 11 page story.
But.......I enjoyed it and gave you 4 Stars.
Rapier
GEEZ , SUPPOSED TO BE A SPICY EROTIC STORY , SO LONG AND BORING , I EVEN HUNG ON UNTIL PAGE 6 THEN CAME HERE TO TELL YOU TO FORGET WRITING ANY MORE , I JUST WASTED SO MUCH TIME
The story overall was good and had a decent "plot" but to me there was far too much description of the world around them to the point where it was becoming distracting almost to the point of thinking "is this guy just showing his knowledge of Australia ??".
Would have been much better to have spent the effort on telling their story beyond where this ends.
This tome is far too long, repetitious, wordy and in need of editing. Some of your previous stories are much better. Good luck with future efforts.