All Comments on 'Cousins'

I loved this story - every paragraph of it. Thanks...

What a great story, Ohh to have had an experience like that, being a tit lover, I dont know if I could have "stood"it !! Keep up the good work, Jeff

Fantastic like all her submissions. I will admit I was dissapointed things didn't progress all the way. A fantastic knack for writing completely believable stories, which makes them all the hotter

Wonderfully HOT-HOT SEX is what we get. Ah, youth and virginity! And the loving is well based on long affectionate development of the relationships among these three beautiful young people. Great stuff!

If you're going to write for public viewing, at least learn the basics. Damn! It need not be perfect but some of those random goofs were embarrassing and distracting.

[ OK, if you're sure you want too then! ] WTF?

[ "You tell us when your there." ] your there - my there - our there - his there - her there ???

The story never really got going in any case.

Love the Cousins story. Kept me hard all the time.

a nice little tale of finding out about sex with each other...all good fun...pity he never got to fuck them both though....

A really wonderful, 'coming of age' story. Kinda glad you didn't go over the top with it by insisting on anal, pregnancy, including mom or uncle, or continueing the relationship. You didn't even mention Marsha or Brenda having penetrative intercourse with him. I'm afraid I would find it interesting to find them married years later. I guess since I married my own cuz thirty years ago and the similarities with your story are just weird. Though we did not have anyone with in our 'voyage of discovery' we were virgins, both of us. And still, today, neither of us has had any kind of sex with anyone else. We played out some of our early 'play time' in her father's airstream 18ft double axle camper trailer. The rocking was very erotic!

The story was fantastic but i missed the details of girl being fucked hard by the cousin, It would have added more spice to the sex tale. May be the author planning to come out other part of the story

YOU JUST NEVER CEASE TO AMAZE ME WITH YOUR WRITING. SURE GOING TO MISS YOU WHEN I'VE READ THEM ALL. ACTUALLY I USE A TEXT READER CALLED TEXTALOUD WITH THE IVONA VOICE JENNIFER. HER VOICE IS SO HOT, SO SEXY, BLOWS ME AWAY WHEN SHE SAY'S "FUCK".

Well written and very exciting.

i found this very anticlimactic.

a waste of my time. 1*