by westjayne495
Great story, although I thought they would have ended up having sex in the car with the "cop" watching them.
Bordered on hilarious story; nicely done. Enjoy your writing and still curious about what Sophie and Jayne are going to do in your “photography” tale. Now that was a wonderfully erotic, even tender tale - I almost said tale of love given the last few lines. Maybe that tale had to end as it did (?) because at least a couple of the possible future directions would be hard to craft or hard to take.
God that brought back memories of wearing out the back seat of my ‘66 Chevelle! My lady was only 5 foot nothing. Great story with keen detail and humor. Lived it
Making the best of a bad situation on two counts. Enjoyed the exhibitionism at the end too.