All Comments on 'COVID Relief Pt. 01'

by Silver Sea

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Blunote39Blunote39about 3 years ago

The potential to be really enticing and erotic were there, but the whole story ended up being too 'cut-and-dry'. The characters' reactions were strictly business-like and robotic for the build up to be effective; would've wanted them to be more fleshed out. When the climax is finally reached it's void of details and brief.

The story's setting and situations actually reminded me of a Literotica story I loved, the main characters' names are pretty similar (Brent and Brett), so my expectations may be too high for this one.

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I enjoy sharing ideas and fantasies by reading and writing here at Literotica. Thank you for any time you give to my writing. I do appreciate it and hope I can repay your time by giving you some enjoyment from my wordr.