by Silver Sea
The potential to be really enticing and erotic were there, but the whole story ended up being too 'cut-and-dry'. The characters' reactions were strictly business-like and robotic for the build up to be effective; would've wanted them to be more fleshed out. When the climax is finally reached it's void of details and brief.
The story's setting and situations actually reminded me of a Literotica story I loved, the main characters' names are pretty similar (Brent and Brett), so my expectations may be too high for this one.