by AllSoTwisted
You really know how to tease the heat into and out of a story - impossible to stop reading them. Please don't stop writing them - this one surely deserves more followups too. Excellent stuff - me and my throbbing hard on thank you for sharing lunch with us LOL
How about using some names insitead of L or P or whatever. Makes it hard to read.
This has a good plot, with a clever twist. It's all also well-written. I'd also like to meet Annie. - Congratulations.