by al_Ussa
Writing is fine and the situation is believable. OTOH, for me there was too much too soon. I personally would prefer a bit of coyness; and excuse to expose a breast. Maybe the salsa splashes; that kind of thing. I also like it when there is more of a "What am I doing?" theme. And the relationship between Nell and Miguel just got really complex. I suppose a lot of folks on this site like the 'OMG factor' where sex suddenly is happening. I like the build up, the questioning, the seduction.
Great story.......two of my favorite things. Bisexual and Mexican........great written story......More of the older mexican ladies.
Wow really very good. There could be several more episodes where Mrs. Gonzalez
introduces Nell to her other Lesbian friends. Then how they introduce Nell to their friends, Then how she is abused in Lesbian clubs, massage parlors, perhaps by some cock fun with black men. You are clearly a creative writing so come on lets have Parts 1, 2, 3 and so on.
Why did the mom want sex with her sons girlfriend???? It's just so weird but I want to my own little session of sex too. Not to hardcore though.
Great little story, I love red heads with small pert breasts. Picturing this story has made me very hard!
Now what am I to do? Go look for a red head!
will she now prefer beef in her burrito or chicken???